I Wrote A Song: Hear

This is not my first song, my first song i wrote is when i was a 9 grader. Now i wrote my second song, and it's about my love story with my ex, hehe. Here it is:

Hear

Hear what i've said
Hear what i've told to you
Hear what i wanted you to be
I just want you to be in a right way

I love every inch of you
Every breath you take
Every step you make
But please, dont choose what's bad for you

But i know you're not that bad

You are my one
My one
And will be forever one
Please think twice
Please hear what i have said
Before you regret what you've done

I love you for my lifetime